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Werewolf@Night
02-05-2004, 03:30 PM
Here is my alternative version of season five. It starts off where Home ends. (All the plots I mean)

If you want to read it from a website and not here, go here (http://www.she-crazy.net/~Jonny/501.html)

If not...here it is :) Hope you like it....or else :: jack ::

Angel
Season 5
Episode 01
"Small World"

WESLEY
Previously on Angel:

HOLLAND MANNERS
Wolfram & Hart. Our firm has always been here. We go on...no matter what.

CUT TO:

LILAH
I don't think you'll want it, but you'll take it, because this is the offer of a lifetime.

CUT TO:

GUNN
You want to run that by us one more time?

LILAH
What was unclear?

FRED
I think the part where you offered us Wolfram & Hart.

LILAH
Just the L.A. Branch.

LORNE
(chuckles) "Just the L.A. Branch." (stands, irritated) Hi, from another dimension, what the hell does that mean?

LILAH
Means we give. You win. We're moving out. The senior partners are ceding this territory to you, and to prove it, they want to give you controlling interest in our L.A. Office. You get the building, assets, personnel, letterhead, paper clips, all of it. It's yours to do with as you see fit.

CUT TO:

FRED
You found Cordy? And she's-

LILAH
Still in a coma.

CUT TO:

LILAH
You're the boss. (hands Angel the file and amulet) There'll be a limo waiting outside. It'll take you to see Connor.

ANGEL
(softly) Thank you. (walks out the door)

FRED
(watches Angel leave) Who's Connor?

Showing a clip of Angel, Wesely, Gunn, Fred, and Lorne standing in the lobby of Wolfram & Hart

LILAH (Voiceover)
Welcome to Wolfram & Hart, and enjoy your stay

Teaser

Angel's main office, Angel is leaning against his desk.

The camera cuts to a small, golden plaque that says: "Angel Smith - Wolfarm & Hart CEO"

The camera cuts to a large view of the office. Wesely walks in.

ANGEL
Hello, Wesley

WESLEY
(Nervous) Uh, hello Angel.

ANGEL
Nervous?

WESLEY
First day at the job, you know little butterflies

Fred and Gunn walk in. The camera cuts to Fred

FRED
Hey, just Gunn and I just coming early

The camera cuts back to Angel, viewing his watch

ANGEL
The meeting started three minutes ago

Pan to Fred and Gunn making faces for being late. As Lorne walks threw the doors

LORNE
Welcome loony tunes.

Zoom out to everyone standing in the office

ANGEL
I told you to never say that again Lorne

LORNE
(Walks and sits down at the now visible meeting table) Well you know me; I take every chance I get.

GUNN
So (Gunn sits down at the table) we all (Angel and Fred sit down. Angel is on the top of the table) Here?

WESLEY
Well, I have a little special guest

ANGEL
Who?

The camera pans slowly, as the camera finally reaches the front door of the office. The doors open but no one appears to be there.

WESLEY (voiceover)
No one special

The camera takes a better look at the door, as it changes its angle. Faith is there standing

Cut to opening credits. Theme song plays.

"ANGEL" staring:

David Boreanaz
Alexis Denisof
J. August Richards
Amy Acker
Andy Hallett
and
Eliza Dushku as 'Faith'


Guest Starring:

Stephanie Romanov as 'Lilah Morgan'
D.B. Woodside as 'Robin Wood'
Mercedes McNab as 'Harmony Kendall'
Jonathan Woodward as 'Knox'


ACT 1

The Hyperion, night. On the bottom of the screen it says: 'Two months earlier: July 2003' everyone is sitting together at the table, having dinner.

LORNE
A toast?

GUNN
Of course (raises his glass as everyone follows)

Camera cuts to Gunn and Fred holding hands underneath the table.

Camera cuts out to Angel

ANGEL
A toast, to new life!

LORNE (voiceover)
And better clothes!

Cut to the overview of the table

WESLEY
A whole new world of ideas, and wonder

LORNE
Yea, yea but what about the clothes?

GUNN
Better weaponry, as well

FRED
Weapons (rests her head on Gunn's shoulder)

ANGEL
Cheers.... (They all knock their glasses together and start to drink in union)...to Wolfarm & Hart

Cut to a dark Hyperion room, dark shadows are kissing.

FRED
Oh, Gunn....you've never done that before

The camera pans to across the room wall as Angel and Gunn are walking down the hallway

ANGEL
I still have a bad feeling about Wolfram & Hart

GUNN
You're not the only one; I mean we spent the past years fighting against them. And they think they can just waltz in and...

LORNE (voiceover)
Let us take over a multi-million company

The camera zooms out a little to see Lorne joining in on the conversation

LORNE
Money buys you happiness, besides we'll finally have control of everything that happens in this great city of lies and deceits

GUNN
He's right; we'll be on top of all the evil that happens

ANGEL
And the good

GUNN
And the good, yes. I think it's a good idea

ANGEL
I still have doubts

LORNE
Didn't Ally McBeal give us a 7-day trial?

GUNN
Her name is Lilah, and she only gave us 3 days to see how it is before we give our signature

ANGEL
Or we can reject them

GUNN
That's always an option, but think about it Angel!

LORNE
We'll be the icing of the polluted, industrial cake of LA

Cut to Angel and Gunn talking to Lilah. You can't hear what they are saying. Soft music is playing in the background. They shake hands as the camera cuts to Wolfarm & Hart, streets of LA, strip club, and then at the Hyperion. Lilah, Angel, and Gunn are in the lobby.

LILAH
So it's a deal, big man?

ANGEL
Not official, we'd like to see a tour

LILAH
I already gave you one

ANGEL
But we aren't separated this time

Pan closely to Lorne busting through the door.

GUNN (voiceover)
I agree, I don't know what you were trying to do

The camera follows Lorne as he runs upstairs

LILAH (voiceover)
Okay, you don't have to jump on me

The camera pans sideways as Lorne walks down the hallway

LILAH (voiceover)
Get the rest of your recruits

ANGEL (voiceover)
Lorne was finding Wes and Fred after he did an errand. He just came in

Lorne opens the door to a room looks around

LORNE
Fred? Wesley?

Lorne shrugs and slams the door behind him, going to another door. The camera stays in the room

LORNE (voiceover)
Any brits in the room?

The camera slowly pans across to the bed; there is a bump in it. As Wesley and Fred appear from it, holding the blankets closely to their chest.

WESLEY
He didn't catch us

FRED
G-good (Wesley looks a little hurt) It's not that it's a bad thing, but with all the angst with Wolfram and Hart. And Gunn

WESLEY
(Rolls his eyes) Gunn. Are you still?

FRED
Yea

WESLEY
And we?

FRED
...Yea

WESLEY
We won't?

FRED
Agreed

WESLEY
Was it that bad?

FRED
It was perfect (Thinks for a moment and starts kissing Wesley)

Cut to Angel's office. Text appears at the bottom: 'Present'. It is the same scene as the teaser

ANGEL
Faith?

FAITH
In the flesh

FRED
Oh, Wesely. You brought...Faith here?

WESLEY
Well not exactly, we kind of ran in to each other

GUNN
(Gets up from the table) Where?

FAITH
At Demisk Het

WESLEY
It's pronounced: Demonisk Hytte.

ANGEL
Norwegian.....for?

LORNE
Demon hut, my colleagues go there. It's a demonic place where....demons, in this case people, meet to exchange demonic spells.
ANGEL
You were at a demonic spell exchange center?

WESLEY
It isn't as bad as it seems, I was finding a spell for someone

Fred smirks a little, shyly

ANGEL
I'll take your word for it, but why was Faith there?

FAITH
Wood, my boyfriend, got injured in San Diego

GUNN
With Buffy and gang?

FAITH
Yeah, we were fighting off another big bad. Did you know they have a mini-hellmouth there?

LORNE
California and their love for the hellmouth

FAITH
Yea, the first with its last attack sent out part of the hellmouth all over the place. Give those new slayers something to do

GUNN
And your boyfriend got injured

FAITH
It's worse then you think, I didn't think he'd make it. So I went to Demon Hut

WESLEY
Demonisk Hytte

FAITH
Demonisk Hytte, to get a spell to make him better. It's getting worse by the minute. He almost looks like a zit itself. So I saw Wes, or he saw me. I really can't tell anymore, and he brought me here. After he let me stay at his apartment the other night

FRED
(Anxious) You stayed in his apartment? (Calms down when everyone looks at her) So...you were brought here?

FAITH
Yea

ANGEL
(Shaky) Where's Buffy?

FAITH
She and the scoobs are on their quest towards Cleveland. This is just a pit-stop

ANGEL
Are you going to leave if Wood gets well?

FAITH
I don't really know, just a pit-stop sounds a lot better. Doesn't it?

ANGEL
I guess, so what you want a spell?

FAITH
To revive Robin

ANGEL
A g-girl?

FAITH
No, this is Faith speaking; not Willow. Mr. Robin Wood is a man

GUNN
Wait a second; his name is Robin...Wood? Robin Wood. Robin Wood, okay I'll try not to laugh

FAITH
Shut up, this is serious. Vampires have got stronger ever since the litters of slayers are all over the world.

FRED
It's hard thinking about that. A thousand slayers

WESLEY
Even more then that, I believe. So I told Faith how we now control Wolfram & Hart, she decided to join us

ANGEL
In Wolfram & Hart?

FAITH
That is what mini-Giles said, isn't it? I thought I'd help out; it has been such a small world since I'm not one of the chosen two

FRED
What are you going to do here?

WESLEY
I assigned an appointment with Lilah (checks watch) which you are supposed to be at....right now

FAITH
Okay, boss-man

ANGEL
(Raises hand) That is actually me

FAITH
(Turns to Angel) Okay, boss-man. (Turns back and heads down the hallway)

Cut to a small office. The camera slowly pans to Faith opening the door and sitting down on a chair.

FAITH
Lilah?

Cut back to Angel's office.

ANGEL
You set an appointment with Lilah...for Faith?!

WESLEY
She has nowhere else to go. Her companions left her here as they went cross-country to the other hellmouth

LORNE
I always thought she added to the mix of our spice bowl of vampires, psychics, and demons

GUNN
Okay, besides Faith; are we ready to have our meeting?

FRED
I want to; I can't wait to learn what I'm going to do

ANGEL
(Holding a folder as he sits down on the head of the table) Sit down everyone (they do so) the officials of Wolfram & Hart, well the ones besides us, have helped me decide the roles of which you will play

The camera pans to Wesley, waiting.

ANGEL (voiceover)
Besides being my official CEO Assistant, Wesley will be the head of Demonology. He will be talking to the demons first and interacting with the demons first. Since he knows a surplus of languages

GUNN (voiceover)
Soon, remember about the operation

Pan to Gunn

ANGEL (voiceover)
Yes, after the operation Gunn will know complete knowledge of the law system. And of course he will be ahead of that

Pan to Lorne

ANGEL (voiceover)
Because of Lorne's empathy power, Lorne will be the resort when things get drastic. Call him a psychologist, if you will.

Lorne pouts a little

ANGEL (voiceover)
And yes, Lorne, you part time will do entertainment

As Lorne smiles the camera pans to Fred

ANGEL (voiceover)
Fred will be the last resort to anything, and I mean everything, that goes to the labs down in the basement. But mostly she'll be my right hand...girl

WESLEY (voiceover)
And we'll be working together a lot, as well

Fred giggles as the camera zooms out

ANGEL
So is Faith soon going to join us?

WESLEY
We don't know how long this meeting will be

GUNN
Yeah, Lilah's meetings are long. I remember

Cut to the office Faith was in. This time Angel, Gunn, and Lorne are there. Lilah opens the door

LILAH
I see you're all in

LORNE
Well most of us, I couldn't really find Fred and Wes

LILAH
We can do without them, so you want one last tour. Together?

ANGEL
That is what I've asked for.

LILAH
Okay (Presses a button on her desk) we’ve set up a video personally for you five. Well now three. This explores what we do around here

ANGEL
This isn't what I asked for; I don't want this video crap. I want the real deal, not some artificial tour Lilah! You know what I want, so give it to me

LILAH
Hold on there cowboy, I don't have the time

ANGEL
What else do you do in this hell hole? Aren't you dead

LILAH
Well my contract still restricts me to here

ANGEL
Stop lying to me! There is no contract, and I know it

LILAH
What's this then? (She takes a paper from her drawers and places it on the table)

The camera cuts to the contract which reads 'Lilah Morgan'. The camera then cuts to the middle of the contract 'forever property of '. The camera cuts to the bottom of the contract which reads in bold read 'Wolfram & Hart'. The camera cuts back to the original scene

LILAH
Is that enough proof for you?

GUNN
Can't you quit?

LILAH
That's the point of the contract, it doesn't matter. So you want the tour?

ANGEL
If we approve, and this is an 'if', we will have control of all employees.

LILAH
Yes

ANGEL
And their contracts?

LILAH
(Unsure) Uh....yes, why?

ANGEL
Nothing and we will have control over our clients?

LILAH
Yes, Angel, so do you want the tour?

ANGEL
No, I want to give my signature

Cut to the Hyperion, day. Fred is fully dressed, as Wesley just zipped up his pants

WESLEY
I'll go there first, to make it seem like we weren't together

FRED
Sounds good. (Wesley heads out the Hyperion as Fred sighs) Sounds good

Pans as Fred walk to one of the Hyperion's tables, where there are bunch of un-sorted paper. The camera slowly zooms on as Fred slowly holds up a paper reading: 'Tabula Rasa'

Cut back to the office

LILAH
I'm sorry it took so long, but you no how officials are. We had to agree on the final print, there is always an argument. No matter what

Cut to the door as Wesley busts through it

WESLEY
Sorry I'm late

LILAH (voiceover)
You’re right on time

Cut back to the office

WESLEY
What is she talking about Angel?

ANGEL
I'll answer ONCE you tell me where you were

WESLEY
I was doing an errand

GUNN
We are going to give our signature

WESLEY
On the contract?

LORNE
Yes, all we need is Freddy to sign

LILAH
You don't need to have Winifred's signature yet, she can sign latter. It's just more formal when you are all together

Cut to the door as Fred busts through it

FRED
Sorry if I'm late

ANGEL (voiceover)
You are late, where were you?

FRED
An errand, so what's up?

WESLEY
We're giving our approval to be the head of the LA branch of Wolfram & Hart

LILAH
So you can sign here, here and here. Five lines for each, I have to make a phone call to someone

ANGEL
Who?

LILAH
Eve, now sign away (Lilah walks out of the office)

WESLEY
I can't believe we are going to do this, Angel!

ANGEL
We had a talk about this

FRED
No we didn't

GUNN
Angel, Lorne, and I did. You two weren't there for someone reason

FRED
It is July, I have things to do. But anyways, these are the people we have fought

ANGEL
We've talked about this Fred; we will now be on top of the people we have fought. It's all good (signs three times)

GUNN
There is no worries honey (signs too)

LORNE
No worries (Lorne smiled as he signed too)

FRED
I guess, Wes?

WESLEY
Okay, but I don't want to say I told you so (signs as well)

FRED
Last but not least (signs)

The camera zooms in on the contract. In bold red is all five signatures, the camera slowly zooms out to reveal the same contract but now in Angel's office. Lorne is no longer there

GUNN
Do we have any cases today?

ANGEL
I have no secretary, so I have no idea. Some other part of the staff is taking care of it

FRED
Shouldn't we? I mean we are the head of this estate

ANGEL
Good point

GUNN
I'm sure it'll be all right. We don't have to take care of everything, do we?

FRED
Shouldn't we?

ANGEL
Too many questions, if you ask me. We should take full control. I should know what is going on in my law firm. Wes I need a secretary

WESLEY
I've already took care of that. Well I already made Lorne take care of it; he's holding auditions in the west club as we speak

Cut to a dim club. Lorne is sitting on the stool, next to three girls. One of them is Harmony. The other two are a red head and a burnette.

LORNE
Man this is a comedian's dream. A blonde, redhead, and a burnette in a club. Okay, anyways you all want to be Angel's secretary?

ALL THREE GIRLS
Yes!

LORNE
Well you have to be able to please Angel to his needs

BURNETTE
Oooh I know how to do that

The camera cuts to the back of the burnette. She pulls up her shirt, as Lorne, redhead, and Harmony gasp

LORNE
I compliment you...on your goods, but this never goes well with Angel. It turns all fangs ahoy, so buh-bye now (waves good boy)

The camera cuts to a sideway view of the scene. The burnette know has her shirt on as she storms off.

LORNE
Well that was interesting, hey blonde don't I know you from somewhere

HARMONY
Uh, I don't think so. Anyways, are you going to interview us?

LORNE
Well, of course

HARMONY
(Turns to redhead) I haven't exactly had the best past with redheads, so I'd look out if I was you

LORNE
I like that spirit, what's your favorite fashion company?

HARMONY
Um... (Leans over at Lorne's neck, where the tag is) Bloomingdales

LORNE
I love ya, darlin'. Or shall I say Ms. Secretary

Harmony giggles and jumps with joy

ACT 2

Angel's office, only Faith & Angel are in it

ANGEL
How are you?

FAITH
What do you want me to be?

ANGEL
Happy?

FAITH
Sounds good (smirks) so how are you?

ANGEL
Not the best

FAITH
You are always not the best, well in your eyes

ANGEL
What?

FAITH
Angel you’re the champion, I've been told by many. Back in the jail people talked about you, since you busted them

ANGEL
Is that good?

FAITH
Well some of those people are killers

ANGEL
And you aren't?

FAITH
I turned a new leaf, yo; you should've stayed to see that battle Angel

ANGEL
Buffy t-told you I was came?

FAITH
Get over her!

ANGEL
I am, I have had affairs with some people (scratches his back)

FAITH
How many?

ANGEL
Uh...2

FAITH
Man, Angel, you're like a humpback whale. Who were these lucky ladies?

ANGEL
No one in particular

FAITH
Was it that brainy girl, Freddy?

ANGEL
N-no...more like Darla....

FAITH
That vampire?

ANGEL
Well...yeah, and (mutters) Cordellia

FAITH
Couldn’t hear that last one?

ANGEL
Cordy

FAITH (laughs)
Your kidding....right....right?

The camera slowly zooms out as their voices slowly fade

FAITH
Oh god, I'm sorry....it's funny

They are silent now as they hug and begin talking again. The camera pans to Wesley & Gunn

GUNN
They are getting along just fine

WESLEY
Yup, last time we saw them they were fighting to the death

GUNN
Times were different then

WESLEY
A lot different

EMPLOYE
(Joins in) The thing on the street is that Faith is going to be the CEO's assistant

WESLEY
But, Allen, that is my job. That just can not be. I know they have history

ALLEN
Boss favors her, it's obvious.

GUNN
It is?

ALLEN
Look at them

Cut to the window through Angel's office, they are hugging again

ALLEN (voiceover)
They are hugging, has he hugged you lately?

GUNN (voiceover)
Sort of....no, not really. But that doesn't mean anything

ALLEN (voiceover)
Things are different here, different definitions around here. Get a new vocab if I was you

Cut to the club, Lorne and Harmony are talking. Fred walks in

FRED
Did you get a secretary for Angel?

LORNE
Look at this bombshell Fred

HARMONY
Hello (Shakes her hand) my name is Harmony

FRED
Lorne! May I speak to for a moment (walks away from Harmony, and whispers) What-are-you-thinking?

LORNE
What are you talking about?

FRED
That-is-Harmony! Re-mem-ber?! She was the butt of all Angel's jokes

LORNE
(Takes a look at Harmony) Oooh your right

FRED
You-have-to reject her, Angel will not allow her

HARMONY
Um...I can still hear you guys

LORNE
It's too let Fred, she already signed the contract

FRED
Can't wait to see Angel's expression

HARMONY
Are you mocking me?

FRED
What do you think?

FRED'S POV Down the hallway to the lab, only Knox is there

KNOX
Hey Fred

Camera cuts to a full view of them two

FRED
Hey Knox (smiles)

KNOX
Want to see our new experiment?

FRED
I'm the head of the science department, aren't I?

KNOX
Yes.... (Waits) So that is a yes

FRED
Yes it is a yes

KNOX
Bit of a tongue twister

They both laugh as Fred follows Knox to a dead girl under sheets

FRED
What happened?

KNOX
It is a slayer

FRED
Out of the thousand?

KNOX
Yes

FRED
Did you kill her?

KNOX
Nope we found her corpse, ran some tests to see that she is in fact a slayer. But the funny thing is, well it isn't that funny, but anyways. The weird thing is that there is also a trace of vampire through her veins

FRED
A vampire vampire slayer? Another tongue twist

They nervously laugh again as the camera cuts to the dead corpse.

KNOX (voiceover)
As you can see....

The camera cuts to two bite marks on the corpse's neck

KNOX (voiceover, continued)
...she is obviously bitten by a vampire. And her strength tops the charts; obviously the vampire blood gave her a boost on her ability

FRED (voiceover) I'm afraid to ask

The camera cuts back to them examining the body

FRED (continued)
But how did she die?

KNOX
We have no idea, maybe a virus, we have no idea

FRED
Are we going to find out?

KNOX
No, we are just going to stare (Fred looks at him a little) Sarcasm

FRED
Oh....okay (embarrassed)

They both turn their backs to get some supplies; the camera slowly zooms in on the corpse's head. All of a sudden it blinks as the camera cuts to Angel's office. Liliah, Angel, and Faith are present

LILAH
You called?

ANGEL
I want to know what Faith will be doing here

LILAH
She didn't tell you

ANGEL
I'm afraid you have to tell

FAITH
Hey I have my reasons, it's an odd job

ANGEL
What is it then?

LILAH
She will be sort of a chief

ANGEL
Expound on that

LILAH
She will be training all are fighters in this facility to fight well, since she is the only slayer in the building present.

FAITH
Hear that Angel? I'm freakin' G.I Jane

LILAH
I keep on telling her that she isn't. You are training all the male and female fighters to their best abilities

ANGEL
Why isn't Gunn apart of this? He is almost as good as Faith

LILAH
We need a top staff of the lawyer branch; I mean it is our cover story. Besides he is getting the operation done as we speak

Cut to a small white room, such as the one on the top floor. There is a dentist-like machine; Gunn is laid back on it. Wesley is over looking as Allen is doing the procedure

WESLEY
What exactly are you doing?

ALLEN
Nothing much

WESLEY
You didn't answer my question

ALLEN
We are placing a microchip in to Charles Gunn's head. This will have him up to date knowledge on everything about lawyers.

WESLEY
Artificial intelligence?

ALLEN
You could say that, but this more like an electronic tutor

WESLEY
How long will this take?

ALLEN
I couple of hours, we need to open up his cranium, make sure the chip has everything, place it in exactly where it is needed, and then close it back up

GUNN
I don't like the sound of opening my head

ALLEN
You'll be drugged

GUNN
Is that supposed to be a relief? Drugs are of the devil's work, like my mom always said

WESLEY
It'll be all right Gunn

Cut to GUNN'S POV, three people with gas masks on place a thing on Gunn.

MASKED GUY
Count backwards.....10....9....8

His voice gets softer as he goes down

MASKED GUY
7....6.....5.....4....

The camera flickers from black to Gunn's POV. Until it stays at black

ALLEN (voiceover)
I rather not have you hear Mr. Price

WESLEY (voiceover)
Okay, just don't kill Gunn

ALLEN (voiceover)
He is in good hands...

Cut to Wesley's office, Wesley is at his desk. Lorne walks in

LORNE
Um...Wes, you got a few

WESLEY
Yes, just researching. Why?

LORNE
Well by accident I hired someone

Harmony appears in the door

HARMONY
Surprise!

WESLEY
Y-y-you hired....her?! (In awe)

HARMONY
Isn't it just the best news you've heard the whole day?

WESLEY
Actually, no. Lorne what is Harmony's job

Lorne makes a shrug

WESLEY (continued)
You’re not telling me....

LORNE
Yup

WESLEY
She's a secretary? Who's?

LORNE
Who else?

HARMONY
I am Ms. Angel's Secretary! Yay!

WESLEY
This is just great, just great. Angel will fire you on the spot

LORNE
She has a 6 month contract until the boss can fire her

WESLEY
Oh....um...I guess the more the merrier

HARMONY
Group hug!

WESLEY
Rather not

LORNE
No thank you

Harmony frowns as she hugs herself

The camera cuts to an alley. The camera cuts closer to Angel and Faith. It's night now.

ANGEL
Did Lilah say it was here?

FAITH
Yup, she said it was an underground training camp

ANGEL
Reminds me of a fellow friend of...

FAITH
Who?

ANGEL
Buffy

FAITH
Oh...Buffy (nods a little as she walks in to this dump)

The camera cuts to this small little hut.

ANGEL
This is crazy

FAITH
A vampire with a soul is crazy, this is just cool

Cut to a small alarm code at the wall of the hut.

Cut back to a wide view of the hut

FAITH
(Looks at a sheet) Okay the code is...

Faith presses a four numbered code as the walls open. Faith and Angel walk down as the camera follows them to a set familiar to the Initiative. There is a woman there waiting for them to arrive

WOMAN
(Shakes hands with Faith) We've been waiting

FAITH
Cool and you are?

WOMAN
Oh I'm sorry I haven't introduced myself. I'm the creator of this camp; my name is Ms. Heather Walsh

ANGEL
I guess I'll be leaving you two ladies alone

HEATHER
Yes, I need a private conversation with Ms. (Flips through some papers) I'm sorry I don't have your last name recorded here

Angel leaves going upstairs

FAITH
(Ignoring her last question) So this is a camp?

HEATHER
You could call it that, more like boot camp. We have about 20 recruits, train them, and they will help out with Angel and Your physical work around here

FAITH
Fighting the baddies?

HEATHER
Exactly, right now we are getting our 20 recruits out of the 76 that have applied

FAITH
A lot of pressure on these hands

HEATHER
That won't matter, right? Because you are a slayer, before the litter of them

FAITH
I guess so, I'm nothing special though

HEATHER
Oh but you are, but you are

Cut to the white room, Gunn is still being operating. All the scientists stop working suddenly as Lorne walks in. Obviously making contrast

LORNE
Aren't you people the delightful bunch

ALLEN
And why are you here?

LORNE
Just checking on my little nut case Charlie.

ALLEN
What happened to Mr. Price?

LORNE
He is taking care of business with the b-o-s-s

Cut to Angel's office, Wesley & Harmony are present.

HARMONY
Where is he?

WESLEY
Probably doing something with Faith

HARMONY
Oh my God! You mean that psycho slayer from high school

WESLEY
She's better now, much better

HARMONY
People don't change Wesley, people don't change

WESLEY
Your wrong Harmony, now stay quite while Angel comes in

HARMONY
What conditioner do you use? 'Cause your hair is all wacky

WESLEY
That is none of your business

HARMONY
If you want to.... (Puts on a British accent) "Shag" woman, you'd better make that hair a little....ya know

WESLEY
No I don’t what?

HARMONY
Oh then you wouldn't want to know now

Cut to the door Angel walks in

ANGEL
Hello Wesley and.....

Cut to Harmony

ANGEL (Voiceover, continued)
Harmony....what's she doing here?

Cut to a wide view of the office

WESLEY
Funny thing

ANGEL
It isn't going to be that funny when I stake her

Harmony hides behind Wesley

WESLEY
Since Lorne and Harmony never properly met, Lorne by accident hired Harmony

ANGEL
WHAT?! What is her job here....

WESLEY
It's in blood so, you can't change it

ANGEL
And....

WESLEY
She's your secretary

ANGEL
(Punches the wall and makes a dent) You've got to be kidding me!?

Cut back to the white room

ALLEN
I hope that goes well

LORNE
I'm not sure about that. So what you doing with my fellow Gunn?

ALLEN
We have put the chip with all the Law Knowledge in the left side of his brain

LORNE
So shouldn't you be done?

ALLEN
Not exactly, we are just adding a little more. Just to round it off

LORNE
Is that a good idea?

ALLEN
Of course, we're just giving 110 percent instead of 100

Cut to the lab basement, the 'dead slayer' is now standing behind Fred and Knox

FRED
So what are we going to...do?

KNOX
Us?

FRED
No the corpse

KNOX
Going to run some tests on her, to confirm some theories

SLAYER
I wouldn't do that

Fred and Knox turn around to see the Slayer. The camera cuts to the slayer's eyes as they turn pitch black.

SLAYER (voiceover)
Besides being a vampire and a vampire slayer....

Camera cuts to the wide view the slayer is holding up Knox

SLAYER (Continued)
I'm a Wicca

She throws Knox around the room. The Slayer raises her hand as a green light blasts out sending Fred over as well. The slayer smiles as she makes an explosion

ACT 3

Fade back in on the same scene, the explosion is over. There is stuff scattered across the lab. Knox isn't visible, but Fred is.

SLAYER
I'm not some lab rat you can have fun with. I'm the whole supernatural package

Fred is panting as the Slayer levitates her with telekinesis

SLAYER
Are you even a bit on the supernatural side?

FRED
(Pants) My friend is a vampire

SLAYER
That's nice, so am I

The slayer flings her hand as she makes Fred go flying against the wall

SLAYER
This is going to be fun

Cut to Angel's office, Harmony, Angel, and Wesley are there

ANGEL
I'm sorry, Harmony is fired

Harmony whines

WESLEY
Sorry Angel, she can't be. Not for 6-months

HARMONY
I signed my name in blood

ANGEL
Really? Remind me to talk to Lorne

HARMONY
(Rights something in her notebook) Got it

ANGEL
Harmony get me some pig blood

Harmony walks out of the room, as the camera follows her

EMPLOYE
Did you just fired?

HARMONY
More like hired

EMPLOYEE
Wrong time to get hired, there is a fight in the basement lab

HARMONY
Oooh....I should tell Angel!

Harmony turns around but the employee grabs her hand

EMPLOYEE
No

HARMONY
Why not?

GUNN (Voiceover)
Yes, why not?

Camera cuts to a wide view of the lobby, Gunn, Allen, and Lorne are present

EMPLOYEE
Because things work different around her

ALLEN
Oh don't listen to him. Tim is always babbling nonsense

TIM
I am not!

ALLEN
Oh yes you are, now may I have a word with you Tim about the documents you sent me

Tim and Allen walk off, as Harmony goes to the refrigerator, and Gunn & Lorne walk in to Angel's office

Camera cut to Angel's office with Angel, Gunn, Lorne, and Wesley

LORNE
Hello Mr. Gruesome

ANGEL
Uh hi Lorne

WESLEY
Gunn, is your operation done?

GUNN
Yup (taps the top of his head) everything is inside here

LORNE
Oooh Angel, some guy named Tim told us there is a breakout in the lab

WESLEY
Isn't that where Fred is?

Knox runs in with some scars

KNOX
You guys need to get down there! This slayer/vampire/wiccan is killing Fred

The all run, Lorne is the last one to go out the door

LORNE
Aren't you coming?

KNOX
No...I'll just stay here

Lorne runs out as Knox walks towards Angel's desk and sits down

Cut to the basement, Fred is being held up with a green light surrounding her.

SLAYER
Your ride ends here

The slayer is forming some mystic energy

Cut to a close-on of the Slayer. All of a sudden the slayer falls to the ground. Cut back to original view of the basement to see Faith her foot on the slayer's back

FAITH
I think it is your ride that's ending, Mia

The slayer teleports behind Faith and punches her

MIA
Bitch

Faith ducks the second punch and kicks Mia in the gut. Mia falls back a little as she runs towards Faith pushing her against the wall. Faith slides out of Mia's grasp and jumps kicking her in the chest. Mia falls to the ground, but levitates back up. Mia vamps and gives a punch at Faith; her fist is glowing with mystical light. Faith is sent back a couple feet

MIA
Now to end it

HEATHER (Voiceover)
I don't think so

Cut to Heather a couple of yards from Mia, behind her are the 20 recruits

MIA (voiceover)
Oh but I do

A red force flies from Mia's direction sending all 21 of them injured

Cut back to Mia towering over Faith, she extends her arm to see a red fireball (ex: Willow in Grave) forming in her arms

MIA
Finally I can kill someone

WESLEY (Voiceover)
Zauberei beginnt nicht mehr.

Camera cut to Angel, Gunn, Lorne, and Wesley running down. Wesley is reading from a magic book

WESLEY
Zauberei verläßt diese Tür.

Energy escapes from Mia as she falls back a bit

ANGEL
What did that do again?

WESLEY
Denied her access of her magical abilities

LORNE
So now she is magic-less?

WESLEY
Exactly

Gunn runs to Fred, as the camera cuts to Gunn kneeling down to the hurt Fred

GUNN
You all right sweetie?

FRED
Not the best, but I'm okay

Gunn leans down to kissing Fred

FRED
Have you got the operation?

GUNN
Yup, I'm a lawyer executive

Cut back to Angel, Lorne, and Wesley. Wesley is making a sick face towards the Fred and Gunn action

LORNE
I just love when lovebirds are being lovebirds

Angel runs up towards Mia, and attempts to punch her. Mia grabs Angel's hand and twists it

MIA
You people don't understand, I'm still a slayer

WESLEY
Sorry, but when I did the magic disability that also goes for ever magic spell on you. Well besides mine. Which means that slayer spell done to you, is over

MIA
What?

Faith punches Mia from behind. Lorne throws a stake to Faith, as Faith is about to stake her

FAITH
You're just a vamp now, sweetie

Faith thrusts the stake as the camera cuts back to Angel's office. Angel, Faith, Gunn, Wesley, Lorne, and Fred are there

ANGEL
So how did you know Mia?

FAITH
We picked her up along the way, she ran away as we reached around this place. When looking for her is when the whole Wood trauma happened. And now I'm here

WESLEY
She was an interesting character, a Wiccan slayer bit by a vampire.

FRED
(A cast and bruises) Yea.....interesting all right

GUNN
You'll be as good as new soon honey

FRED
I hope so; will you make it all better?

GUNN
(Kisses her cast) Of course

LORNE
Hate to break this whole 'we killed a lady' talk, but isn't there a vampire with slayer blood out there

FAITH
My men are taking care of that, I need to take care of something myself though

Faith walks out

LORNE
I got a little date of my own...

Whistling Lorne walks out

ANGEL
Do I need an excuse? I'm the boss

Angel walks out

GUNN
Do you want to come back with me?

FRED
I don't know

GUNN
Okay, I'll let you rest

Gunn walks out

WESLEY
(Smiles) Just us here

FRED
No, no Wesely! I've been with Gunn for about two months now; I thought we stopped "running" in to each other

WESLEY
I guess so

FRED
It'll never happened again

Fred walks out

WESLEY
I guess this is my cue to leave

Wesely turns out the lights as the camera fades to black.

Camera fade back in on a hospital waiting room, its night, Faith is there in the waiting room. Angel walks in

FAITH
How did you know I'll be here?

ANGEL
Where else were you going to go? So how is Robin doing?

FAITH
They are going to let me check on him in a few seconds

ANGEL
Oh, so...

FAITH
Do you want to come?

ANGEL
Where?

FAITH
To Robin's hospital room

NURSE
(Walk in) You can see Mr. Wood now

FAITH
You coming?

ANGEL
Sure

Camera cut to the hospital room, Faith and Angel are standing looking down at Robin. Robin is smiling a little

ROBIN
(Weakly and slowly talking) You came

FAITH
Yup

ROBIN
With a friend?

FAITH
No one much

Angel awkwardly waves

ROBIN
Oh, Faith, I love you

Faith places holds hands with Robin

ROBIN
I love...

Camera cut to the IV he's on. Cut back to the heart rate machine. It starts to drop, beeping

Cut to nurses running towards Robin, trying to revive him.

Cut to the waiting room, Angel & Faith are waiting. The same nurse walks in

NURSE
I'm so sorry Ms, I'm so sorry

The Nurse leaves as the camera cuts to the door swinging. The camera cuts back to Faith leaning against Angel's chest crying. Cut again, Angel is holding Faith. Cut again Faith is on the ground sobbing holding close to Angel. Cut to a bird-eye's view of them on the waiting room carpet crying.

FAITH (Voiceover)
It's not fair

Cut to Ending Credits

NEXT WEEK ON 'ANGEL'

Shows Faith lying down in bed

ANNOUNCER (Voiceover)
Faith has lost the one man she loved

Shows Faith kicking a demon in the gut

ANNOUNCER (Voiceover)
Next week she'll find a new love..

Shows the busy lobby of Wolfram & Hart

ANNOUNCER (Voiceover)
Wolfram & Hart....

ANGEL (Voiceover)
You can leave Lilah

Shows Angel ripping a paper

Cut to a big explosion

Cut to the "ANGEL" logo

FRED (Voiceover)
My Fault

Werewolf@Night
02-08-2004, 02:40 PM
does anyone like it? :(

Allycat
02-09-2004, 04:27 AM
Overall 7/10

Story wasn't all that interesting, had a lot of potential wiccan vampire-vampire slayer, but then it's the first episode, there were lots of things to take care of. Bit crammed with small things like Harm, the operation, it all went rather fast. Bit confusing at times, especially the flashback after Faith walks in. There's the occasional mixing up of words like hear and here. One doesn't know knowledge, but has knowledge. Why is Lilah making all the calls, when Angel is supposedly in charge?

But it shows a lot of potential story-wise, so I'll be waiting for the second episode.

Werewolf@Night
02-09-2004, 03:44 PM
Thanks allycat even though I kinda made you post since I double posted with a frown ;)

Well originally I wasn't going to have a monster at all, but the episode was missing something. And I thought a potential wiccan vampire-vampire slayer had potential too, there is going to be some consequences from it as well. Sorry about it being confusing.

Was it better then Conviction? Do you like Faith in the cast instead of Spike? And also do you like the little 'fling' Fred/Wesely had?

Allycat
02-11-2004, 04:37 AM
The frown indeed did it for me, I felt so sorry for you... but you're kind of obligated to read virtual slayer now ;)

The fling is confusing, most importantly, in the real Angel, Gunn and Fred weren't dating anymore.

Faith or Spike is a tough choice, but the way Faith is acting all mysterious is making it worth. Walsh is a nice twist.

Also, don't forget to give Harmony a good place, or I'll stop reading ;)

Werewolf@Night
02-11-2004, 04:12 PM
Thank you for feeling sorry for me :D Not many ppl like this script. Fred and Gunn got together over the summer. I'm writing the next episode right now. Harmony has a good place :D

Guestage_87
02-21-2004, 09:24 PM
It's good and very ballsy to rewrite a season IMO. But is the addition of Faith really needed? I just don't get why everyone thinks why Faith should be involved in EVERYTHING! Don't get me wrong, coolest character that Joss and ME ever created, I just think her coolness is in the fact that she was never shoved down our throats (much like Spike)