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SilentWhispers
02-27-2004, 10:01 PM
Title: Can't Fight The Moonlight
Author: Me
Rating: 12
Couples: Oz/Bree, Chris/Xander
Characters: Oz, Bree, Chris, Xander, Kevin, and I'll add more as I write the story.
New Characters: Bree, Chris (GIRL), Kevin
Plot: Oz runs away from home and ends up in Sunnydale, he calls his old friends and is in a band. He stays at his brother's house. But he hides a deep secret, and when he meets Bree, a beautiful young blonde at 18, his whole life changes...
Season: ACtually my story is Pre-Scoobies and pre-Sunnydale
Hi everybody this my first fanfiction. And I hope you alenjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it. :)
Please respond with your honest opinion!
Prologue
The full moon reflected in his green eyes as he ran swiftly and silently through the night. A chilled breeze swept through the air and struck the animals black fur. The heart of this beast pounded as he ran faster and faster.
It was Midnight when he finally stopped and let out a howl sounding as cold as death.
Pillow Willow
02-27-2004, 10:11 PM
Umm... there's not much to say, you didn't post too much....
Magui
02-27-2004, 10:12 PM
Another Oz fanfic,cool!.I love Oz:D...Post more:: tu ::
Charming Slayer
02-27-2004, 10:16 PM
Ashley!!!
You actually posted your story!!Catch me,I'm faint...lol. :p
Very good!!!You know I lurve it.Can't wait to read the first chapter!!!!
Peace,
Amanda
That was really short. I'll take everyone's lead and suspect it's an OZ fan fic. Keep going, we need to read more.
SilentWhispers
02-28-2004, 10:41 AM
Thanx everyone! : hugs : Im soo happy someones going to read it, Ill post the first chapter soon, but right now im about to leave so Chapter One will be up soon!
CYa,
Ashley
SilentWhispers
03-01-2004, 05:05 PM
Runaway
Oz threw the bag over his shoulder and opened the window. A chilling breeze settled in. He closed his eyes and let the cool breeze sweep through his strawberry-blonde hair. He opened his eyes and looked out into the darkness.
"This is it". he reasured himself.
He stepped out onto the branch of the tall oak tree in his backyard. He then jumped down onto the cold, wet lawn.It was a chilly Saturday night and his parents hd gone out to a banquet that would be lasting about 4 hours long. By then, they would be pouring themselves into bed.
Oz wasn't sure where he was going as long as it was far away from here.
He started off into the forest. He walked down random paths and cut through fields along the way to...somewhere. He traveled along for hours of what seemed like days. It was nearly 8:00 a.m when he reached a sign.
It read:
WELCOME TO SUNNYDALE!
"Well this is my stop" Oz said to himself.
"Welcome to Sunnydale"
kinda short but tell me what you think anyway! ;)
Charming Slayer
03-01-2004, 08:22 PM
YIPEE!!!
First chapter!!
Oh Ashley,I loved it!It was so great.As I understand,this is written Pre-Sunnydale and Pre-Scoobies???Just making sure,my brain took a while to process this....
Great chapter,post more ASAP!!!!:)
SilentWhispers
03-04-2004, 05:17 PM
I'll post more later when i get the time and after i rewrite it,
CYa,
Ashley
SilentWhispers
04-02-2004, 05:44 PM
OK Here's chapter 2
Bump in the Night
Brianna Halliwell wasn't any 18 year old girl. Sure, she was now getting out of high school, went out, and lived her life.
Short blonde hair, green eyes, and has an Okay shape.
Pretty normal right?
Bree was a witch. She had a necklace with a moon on it with one black stone in the middle. She was able to shape-shift, (not at will but it's a start ;). She was a beautiful young girl, though... often immature at times. She was opininated and speaking her mind often got her into trouble. But she had a bad attitude and sometimes got into fights. But she was a tough, strong fighter...
With an even stronger will.
Bree sat cross legged on her bed, hand on her knees with her eyes closed. Candles circled around her. She tried hard to concentrate on her breathing. In through the nose, out through the mouth. She sat there still as stone and started to levitate off the bed. All six yellow candles started to come up too.
'RING'!
Bree fell out of the air and rolled over the bed and fell on the floor laying on her back. She sat up and went over the bedside table and picked up the phone and sat up on the bed.
"Hello?"
"Bree, hi" The voice over the phone spoke in a high pitched voice, obviously excited.
"Hey Chris"
"Sup, you got to come out to The Bronze"
Bree looked over at the clock seeing it was near 8:00 p.m.
"Okay. Pick me up?"
"Well, i'm not aout to let you drive. You'll get us both killed!"
She hung up, leaving Bree with the sound of the dil tone. Bree smiled, it was true, she was little wild.
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The strobe lights flashed and the music pounded, shaking the walls. But, no matter what, still screams and shouting of the people could be heard.
Bree sat at the bar drinking a coke and listening to the music pound in her ears. Chris ran up to Bree,
"Great place, huh?"
"Yeah" Bree yelled at the top of her lungs to be heard over "Chinese Burn".
"I also found this great guy, SO CUTE!"
Bree had to hold in a laugh like Chris. A boy with dark brown hair and a baby faced look.
"Bree Xander, Xander Bree."
"Hi Xander."
"Let's dance!" Chris said pulling Xander out into the crowd out of sight. Bree got up.
Bree went out the door, into the cold night air and walked down the street in the direction of the park.
**COMING SOON**
Is there something wrong in Bree's World?
Who is this Xander guy really?
Bree, good or bad?
Find out next time in
*~Can't Fight The Moonlight~*
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