David's Girl
05-05-2004, 01:10 PM
OK, this is my first go at a fan fic. More will come, but I want to get people opinions. Also, if you ahve a better name, please tell me!
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“Morning!”
Vicky had just woken up. It was the middle of the holidays & she was just beginning to enjoy the lie-ins.
“I had another of those weird dreams last night. This really cute guy hit on me so we went outside. Then he had this really ugly face & he started biting me! Not nice.”
The hamster squeaked. He always listened to her but his responses were always the same. And even then he only squeaked because he knew he would get a cornflake.
Vicky poured herself her cornflakes and gave one to the hamster. As she eats she starts talking again.
“I really should think of a name for you. I’ve had you nearly a month! How about...Weird thing in my dreams? No, you’re not in my dreams. Stupid idea!”
Just as she gets up to put her bowl on the top on the carefully stacked pyramid next to the sink she hears a knock on the door. Vicky ran around clearing away anything that looked suspicious, including the hamster cage. The last one got taken away because the police thought she was storing drugs in it’s bed!
“Coming!” she yelled as she quickly put some jeans on. The last cop that came to the door was really cute, but unfortunately she was in her nightgown.
“What do you want?” she asked as she opened the door. As the guy turned around she could see that he definitely wasn’t a cop. Then he spoke. “Are you Victoria Karmen?”
“Who wants to know?” She has to be cautious. You never know who people are these days.
“I’m Rupert Giles. If you are Victoria, then I believe I’m your new watcher.”
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“Morning!”
Vicky had just woken up. It was the middle of the holidays & she was just beginning to enjoy the lie-ins.
“I had another of those weird dreams last night. This really cute guy hit on me so we went outside. Then he had this really ugly face & he started biting me! Not nice.”
The hamster squeaked. He always listened to her but his responses were always the same. And even then he only squeaked because he knew he would get a cornflake.
Vicky poured herself her cornflakes and gave one to the hamster. As she eats she starts talking again.
“I really should think of a name for you. I’ve had you nearly a month! How about...Weird thing in my dreams? No, you’re not in my dreams. Stupid idea!”
Just as she gets up to put her bowl on the top on the carefully stacked pyramid next to the sink she hears a knock on the door. Vicky ran around clearing away anything that looked suspicious, including the hamster cage. The last one got taken away because the police thought she was storing drugs in it’s bed!
“Coming!” she yelled as she quickly put some jeans on. The last cop that came to the door was really cute, but unfortunately she was in her nightgown.
“What do you want?” she asked as she opened the door. As the guy turned around she could see that he definitely wasn’t a cop. Then he spoke. “Are you Victoria Karmen?”
“Who wants to know?” She has to be cautious. You never know who people are these days.
“I’m Rupert Giles. If you are Victoria, then I believe I’m your new watcher.”