mire
05-05-2004, 08:03 PM
“Nowhere to hide” by mire00
Disclaimer: These characters are the property of Joss Whedon.
Spoilers: season 5...with my slightly disturbed mid twist
Feedback: Yes, Please! :D
Rated: pg-13 I think…possible nudity…
Notes:*** indicates thoughts
By the way, I’ve got this idea of a game thread in BBoards after picturing what if the fang gang woke up in a room with a huge hangover, and not remembering anything of the night before…
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Part I: waking up
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Angel opened his eyes slowly, and toke his hands to his head because of the pain. After a while he tried to get up or at least sit on the bed. It toke a little while but he succeeded. He looked around, but even with the his vampire vision, the room seemed to dark to see anything. He got up, and tried to find a light switch, but after a couple of steps he stumbled on something…
- Autch!
He had no time to see what or who did the sound since the light suddenly turned on, and with the pain of the direct light hitting his eyes, he fall back to the floor.
- Angel? – Wes firm English voice seemed a little sleepy.
He was standing next to the wall witch had the switch light, and he had a blanked on top of him.
- Boss?! - he looked to his side and realized that he stumbled in Harmony: - why are you naked?
He looked to his body, and she was right, he was naked…
- Sweet Marilyn! What’s happening in my head? – Lorne woke up in a mix of choked looks, when he realized he was naked in the ground next to Harmony…which was also naked!
As he rose up and tried to find his cloths or something to cover him up, the gang all turned their heads to a groan in the back of the room.
- Oh bloody hell...
Angel mouth fell open when he saw Spike rising from the bed he previously woke up.
- Oh my god… - he mumbled with a chocked face.
~*~*~*~*~*~
So what do you think? Is it that bad?... tell me if it’s that bad, since I had no beta reader for this, and this was written in 1am… please give me some feedback, so i knowif i continue or just stop.
Disclaimer: These characters are the property of Joss Whedon.
Spoilers: season 5...with my slightly disturbed mid twist
Feedback: Yes, Please! :D
Rated: pg-13 I think…possible nudity…
Notes:*** indicates thoughts
By the way, I’ve got this idea of a game thread in BBoards after picturing what if the fang gang woke up in a room with a huge hangover, and not remembering anything of the night before…
~*~*~*~*~*~
Part I: waking up
~*~*~*~*~*~
Angel opened his eyes slowly, and toke his hands to his head because of the pain. After a while he tried to get up or at least sit on the bed. It toke a little while but he succeeded. He looked around, but even with the his vampire vision, the room seemed to dark to see anything. He got up, and tried to find a light switch, but after a couple of steps he stumbled on something…
- Autch!
He had no time to see what or who did the sound since the light suddenly turned on, and with the pain of the direct light hitting his eyes, he fall back to the floor.
- Angel? – Wes firm English voice seemed a little sleepy.
He was standing next to the wall witch had the switch light, and he had a blanked on top of him.
- Boss?! - he looked to his side and realized that he stumbled in Harmony: - why are you naked?
He looked to his body, and she was right, he was naked…
- Sweet Marilyn! What’s happening in my head? – Lorne woke up in a mix of choked looks, when he realized he was naked in the ground next to Harmony…which was also naked!
As he rose up and tried to find his cloths or something to cover him up, the gang all turned their heads to a groan in the back of the room.
- Oh bloody hell...
Angel mouth fell open when he saw Spike rising from the bed he previously woke up.
- Oh my god… - he mumbled with a chocked face.
~*~*~*~*~*~
So what do you think? Is it that bad?... tell me if it’s that bad, since I had no beta reader for this, and this was written in 1am… please give me some feedback, so i knowif i continue or just stop.