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Hero
11-09-2003, 09:22 PM
Chapter One

He looked down at the coffin, where his mother's body lay still. He could remember everything his mother said and did, how she spoke, how she fought, how she cared. He remembered the night his aunt and uncle came home to tell him the news.

One Week Before

He sat doing his homework. A junior in high school, he had hard classes like geometry. He couldn't even spell geometry. How was he supposed to measure angles and find the distance between point xyz and abc. He tapped his pencil down on the notebook, trying to make some sense out of the homework that was in front of him.

The door downstairs opened, as people entered the house. He was up past his restricted bed time. He found it ironic that he was 17 years old, yet he still had a bedtime. He threw all his books on the floor, turned his lights off, and got under the covers.

As the people outside his room passed by, he could distictly hear someone crying. He guessed it was Willow, judging by the somewhat high pitched sound of the cry. He had a huge heart, just like his mother, so he got out of bed.

He trudged down the hallways, wearing his pajama pants and t-shirt and knocked on the door at the end of the hallway.

"Come in."

He opened up the door and walked in. They were both sitting there on the bed, crying. He walked up to them and sat next to them, putting his hand on their shoulders.

"What's wrong? What happened?"

Present Time

He looked down at his mother and kissed her cheek gently. He sat down in the isles and waited for the funeral to start. He looked at Willow, Xander, Faith, and Spike (the funeral was at night) and then looked at the little booklet in his hand.

[i]Buffy Anne Summers[/b]

"Mom..." A small tear formed in his eyes.



Should I continue? What do you think? It'll be easier to understand, but this was only a teaser.

Magui
11-10-2003, 12:32 PM
i don't get somethings -eg. 'mom'....,ok,i need to know who's ''daddy''...countinue plz ;).hate having doubts!

ana8
11-10-2003, 12:35 PM
It's good!!!Magui look at it:Mom-that boy is Buffy's son,I think....

Hero
11-10-2003, 01:10 PM
Here's a small summary, just so things seem simpler.

Parker is Buffy and someone's son (Not Riley, Spike, or Angel's). I didn't make up a name and info for him yet, but when I do I'll add it into the story. Anyway, the guy left Buffy when she was pregnant so she moved in with Xander and Willow. Parker is a junior at high school. One night while doing his homework, Xander and WIllow came home, crying. Parker asked them what's wrong. Although it's not in the story, Buffy was killed by a vampire. The parts at the beginning and end were at her funeral. (Not Riley, Spike, or Angel's)

Magui
11-10-2003, 02:34 PM
Originally posted by ana8
It's good!!!Magui look at it:Mom-that boy is Buffy's son,I think....


i know,she's the mother.who's the dad?..she had a son.well,she needed a guy to,well,ya know



not angel,spike or riley?,huh?...oh,i know: ANGELUS!

Hero
11-10-2003, 02:37 PM
I really didn't think who the father was would be this much of a deal, lol. Want me to make up a bio for the dad?

Magui
11-10-2003, 02:42 PM
can he be angelus?plz,it would so ...crazy and weird...but cool---well,dunno,anyway the only important here is that he's not spike

continue with the story plz ;)

Hero
11-10-2003, 02:49 PM
Well, how would I pull it off? oh! yes! here is the explanation of how Angelus is Parker's father.

As said in the prophecy, once Angel does what he's supposed, he will be made human again. And, as the Master said "prophecy's are tricky things, they don't tell you everything". Once Angel did what he needed to, he did become human again, it's true. BUT! It didn't just go like that. Angel split into two, one being Angel as a human, and the other as Angel as a vampire. Vampire Angel disappeared, and no one has heard from him, but human Angel went to see Buffy. They had sex (everyone gasps "HE SAID SEX!") and Buffy became pregnant. One day, Angelus did come back. He killed human Angel, and Kennedy, who was trying to protect him.

there ya go. lol.

Magui
11-10-2003, 06:29 PM
ok,i like this story...continue...what happened with parker?

Hero
11-10-2003, 06:31 PM
give me 10 minutes and ill have a new chapter for ya.

Magui
11-10-2003, 06:42 PM
ok,thanks ;)

Hero
11-10-2003, 06:51 PM
Chapter Two

Parker was sleeping in bed. He woke up and looked at the foot of the bed. Angelus stood, staring at him evily. He sat up and looked at the person who looked like his father.

"You're not here." Parker said calmly.

"Not yet..." Angelus snarled as he jumped on the bed, pinning Parker down, and taring into his neck with his fangs.[/i]

Parker shot up in bed, in a cold sweat. He looked at the foot of his bed, but no one was there. He took a deep breath and sat back in bed, trying to calm himself down. What the hell was that? A dream? A nightmare? Definatly a nightmare.

He got out of bed and quickly changed out of his pajama pants. He pulled on some baggy jeans and a hoody. Much like his mother, he had a habit of sneaking out late at night. He had some aggression he needed to take out.

Did he ever make it to patrol? Of course not... he came across a club first.

* * * * *

He walked into the club, listening to the music in the background. He heard the music, but he really didn't 'hear' it. He walked towards the bar. A female bar tender smiled warmly back to him. He'd known the bar tender for months now, and she would always give him drinks, despite the fact that he was under age.

"Hey, kid." She said as she poured a drink for an already drunk man. "Heard your Mom's funeral today. How ya holding up?"

"Not to well..." He looked around. "Seeing how I'm in this club. No disrespect to you of course."

"Yeah, I know. I wouldn't want to work here either." She started pouring him a drink, her back turned. While Parker wasn't looking she slipped something into his drink. She turned back around. "I just need to make ends meet." She handed him the drink. "Shug it. I'll time ya."

"You're on." Parker brought the glass to his lips and then started drinking it down in heavy gulps. A few seconds later he was done. "How long?"

"10 seconds." She smiled. "Perfect... The plan went perfectly." She thought. "So, what else ya gunna do tonight?"

"Probably after this I'll go back home." He said. "I just wanted to get away from the house for a little bit. To many memories."

"Yeah, understandable." She was watching his body and face to see if the drugs started to take affect. "I heard some interesting things about your Mom. Something about her first showing up here with a school bus full of kids, weapons, and injured principals. Tell me about that."

"I... uh... Well..." Parker was beginning to feel dizzy and everything was beginning to become blurry.

"Hey, you don't look so good." She said simpathetically, although this was what she wanted. "Why don't I get you home."

"OK."

Parker and the female bar tender wandered outside the club. She took him down an alley, his feet dragging behind him. When they were away from people, she pushed him against the wall.

"Hey... What are you doing?" He asked, startled.

"Sorry, Kid. Boss wants you." She said as she punched him in the face, her face turning into vamp style.

Parker slumped to the ground next to her. She smiled and began dragging him to the empty apartment near-by. She was almost there when a blonde man wearing a black duster stepped out of the shadows.

"Now... Where do you think you're going with my nephew?" Spike asked stepped forward, glaring.


Should I continue?

Magui
11-10-2003, 07:18 PM
Originally posted by Parker Summers
Should I continue?


one word: YES!...plz?

Hero
11-10-2003, 07:20 PM
Sure. want me to write another chapter tonight? lol

Magui
11-11-2003, 01:09 PM
Originally posted by Parker Summers
Sure. want me to write another chapter tonight? lol

well,if you have time...hehe...

Hero
11-11-2003, 07:15 PM
Chapter Three

"William The Bloody..." The bar-tender stepped back from Parker, cautiously looking at Spike. "He told me you might get in the way of our plans."

"Who would be telling you this, mate?" Spike asked, his accent coming out in his words.

"I'm not supposed to tell. Ya see, I'm supposed to bring this little brat back to my boss. I'm not sure what's gunna happen after that, but I can tell it's gunna be bad..." She looked at Parker. "...for him."

"What makes you think I'm just gunna let you walk away with him?" Spike asked. He was about to spring forward and attack the female vampire, when someone clubbed him over the head. "Bloody hell!" He looked up and saw five vampires standing behind him, one with a bat.

"You don't really have a choice." She nodded towards Spike and then towards the vampires. "Beat 'em up. Make sure he can't follow us."

The vampires began to beat Spike almost into the state of unconsciousness. The vampires kicked his bruised body one more time and then two of them grabbed Parker by the arms and began to drack them back to their head quarters.

* * * * *

Parker woke up on a bed somewhere. He rubbed his head, not opening his eyes. He winced at the welt on his forehead, and wipped away some of the blood on his forehead. He stopped when he heard a sound, the sound of pure evil. Laughing.

Angelus...

rene
11-11-2003, 09:29 PM
OMG that is sooo good-poor spikey! lol more!

Hero
11-11-2003, 09:34 PM
I'll have a new chapter posted tomorrow... or soon as possible.

FiveByFiveB
11-11-2003, 10:22 PM
Read the first chapter so far... Buffy having a son - what a great idea. I've never heard that one before. I'll read the other chapters later as I have to get to bed, but keep writing!

Guestage_87
11-12-2003, 03:20 AM
Great story and it seems like you have a great imagination my man. Keep em coming bro. Great premise.

Magui
11-12-2003, 01:19 PM
''angelus''....what's next??!can't wait ;) ...

Hero
11-12-2003, 02:43 PM
I'll get to work on the new chapter right away.

Magui
11-12-2003, 03:18 PM
i'll huv to wait :( ...it's ok ;)

Hero
11-12-2003, 04:12 PM
Chapter Four

"Wakey Wakey, Kido." Angelus smiled a toothy grin towards his son. "I thought you'd never wake up. This would be less fun if you were asleep."

Parker jumped off the bed and made a run for the door, but Angelus was upon him in seconds. He grabbed Parker by the neck and slammed his head into the wall. He tossed Parker across the room, where he crashed through the bathroom door.

"Does it bother you that your mother left you here to die?" Angelus asked, hoping to strike a nerve in Parker. "She left you all alone, with nothing."

Parker jumped to his feet and then jumped in the air. He grabbed onto a bar going across the ceiling and brought his feet up so they were locked around Angelus's neck. "She did leave me with something." He twisted his feet to the side and Angelus flipped over onto the floor, his head cracking on the floor.

Parker ran for the door again, but when he did the door opened before him. He sighed in relief when he thought it was his friends, but his emotions quickly changed when Drusilla walked into the room.

* * * * *

Willow and Xander sat in the living room of their home. Xander got up from the couch and put a tape in the tape player and then sat back next to Willow. They both stared at the television, unsure of what their emotions would be.

"ANDREW! WILL YOU GET THAT CAMERA AWAY FROM ME!" Kennedy was on the verge of tears. "I JUST SAW TWO OF MY FRIENDS GET KILLED IN FRONT OF ME! AND XANDER'S IN THE HOSPITAL!"

"Tell me how you feel about that, Kennedy." Andrew pointed the camera towards her and then focused it onto her. "How do you feel?"

"I feel like I'm gunna break your damn camera over your head if you don't get it the Hell out of my --"

"Kennedy, this is no time for fighting." Buffy appeared in the room. She was still bruised from her battle with Caleb a few hours ago. "At times like these we have to stay strong, for each other."

Willow suddenly burst into tears. It was to soon for her to try to move on. She needed her best friend back. She got up from the couch and stood in front of Xander. "I'm sorry... It's to soon..." She left him and was walking past the front door when it burst open and a badly injured Spike fell into the house.

"Spike!" Xander and Willow both yelled in unison as they ran towards him and helped him to his feet and onto the couch. "What happened?"

"A girl... Parker... vampire... she took him."

"We better call Faith." Willow walked to the her room where she kept her phone book. She came downstairs and sat next to Spike and Xander with the cordless phone. She started punching in numbers.

"Are you ok, Spike?" Xander stopped. "Not that I care... I can just laugh at you if you aren't." Why did he hate Spike so much? Maybe because of all the killings, and the fact that he tried to rape Buffy a while back. He thought he should be nice, and he really wanted too, he just couldn't put the past behind him.

Spike watched Willow say "goodbye" and hang up the phone. He took an un-needed breath and asked, "Is she coming?"

"Yeah, she's on her way."

* * * * *

"What do you think, Dru?" Angelus asked as he circled Parker and Drusilla. They had tied Parker down to a chair and Drusilla was doing a psychic evaluation on him.

"Your son's head is spinning... Seeing the now and beyond he does... Seeing things, secrets going "spill spill". He doesn't even know what the stars have in store for him." A split second later she was back to sane-ness. "He'll make a good addition to our family."


Should I continue?

Magui
11-13-2003, 02:02 PM
yes please!,i love this story!!

Hero
11-14-2003, 02:04 PM
Hey, sorry, but I'm not in a writing mood today. Earlier today I got hit by a car and I'm kinda sore. So, I'll post a new chapter tomorrow.

rene
11-14-2003, 10:04 PM
im sorry to hear that i hope you are okay!

Hero
11-14-2003, 10:37 PM
Yeah, I'm fine, just a few scrapes and bruises.

Chapter Five

Parker was still tied to the chair. Angelus and Drusilla had left the room and had been gone for what seemed like hours. He wondered what they were up to. Countless of times he had tried to break free from the ropes tying him to the chair, but each time he failed. If only he had the powers his mother did.

He wondered if Spike ever made it back to Willow and Xander. He knew that they would come looking for him. They'd probably stop and get Faith along the way. Would it be smart for them to come? A beaten vampire, a Slayer, a witch, and... Xander. Not the most lethal combination when you're fighting the all might, all evil Angelus, along with Drusilla and a couple other vampires.

His heart skipped a beat when Angelus and Drusilla both walked into the room. They were both smiling, which terrified Parker. Drusilla sat on the bed next to the chair, holding one of her dolls, while Angelus stood next to Parker.

"Well son, I think you're going to make a great vampire." Angelus smiled evily.

"You're not my father. My father was a good person." Parker said, standing up for his father. If only the prophecy had been more accurate, they could have been better prepared. The prophecy never said he would split into two SEPERATE people - Angelus and Angel. He remembered the night it happened. The night Angelus killed Angel.

"ANGEL! JUST GET OUT OF HERE!" Kennedy launched a powerful kick, her foot connecting with Angelus's stomach. "I can take him!"

"No, you can't. I am him. I know how he thinks. He's a monster. You think you have the uperhand now, but it's not going to last." Angel pleaded with her. "Hit him hard enough and we can make a run for it."

"No, let her stay. I like seeing her all tense. The scent is intoxicating." Angelus punched Kennedy in the face. He grabbed her still moving body and kicked her legs out from under her. He sat on top of her, pinning her arms down.

Angel tried to help Kennedy, but Angelus was a vampire, and Angel was just a human. Angelus reached an arm behind him and easily tossed Angel across the room. Then, he turned back to Kennedy and slowly sunk his teeth into her neck. When done with Kennedy, Angelus stepped up and stalked towards Angel.

"Sorry, well... me..." He grabbed Angel by the throat and sunk his teeth into Angel's throat. He tore his fangs out quickly and dropped Angel to the ground. "I'll let you bleed to death."

Angel looked across the room towards the small child in the corner. "I love you... Parker." Was Angel's last words before he died. The words of a father to his son.

Angelus never got to hurt Parker though. The calvary arrived and saved him, but they came moments to soon. Kennedy and Angelus were dead.

"Now, let's get this show on the road." Angelus slowly began lowering his fangs towards Parker's neck.

rene
11-14-2003, 10:47 PM
NO!!!!!!!!!! a cliffhanger! lol darn you! this is really good!!!! i cant wait for more!

Orne
11-15-2003, 07:06 PM
oh yay! u have to keep going! post more soon!

Hero
11-15-2003, 08:38 PM
He thrashed against the arms pulling him, but he was helpless. It was a three against one battle, and he was bound to loose. The three men pulled him into the dark cavern and dropped him to the floor. They took two strands of rope and tied them around his wrists, and then tied them to a large boulder, so he couldn't get out.

One of the men seperated from the others and disappeared behind a large rock formation. He came back moments later, carrying a dark colored box. He set it down on the ground in between the his two other associates and the teenage boy. All in unison, the three men began to pound their wood stafs into the ground.

Slowly, the black box on the ground opened. A black swirling figure slowly floated out and levitated above the young teenager. It swirled around him and began going inside him, through his mouth, ears, and nose. The teenager started pulling at the ropes desperately. They broke and he ran out of the cavern as fast as his legs could take him.

"Should we get him?" One of the men asked in a long since forgotten African language.

"No, go find the girl, she stands a better chance of being controled. She will do what's he's told.

* * * * *

Parker regained consciousness. Angelus had always been known for his cruelty and torture. He wasn't about to let Parker just die and become a vampire. He wanted to torture him, have some good fun with him, then kill him. Minutes before, he sank his teeth into Parker's neck. He sucked the blood that flooded out, almost to the point where Parker died. He stopped, sensing Parker's life slipping away, and left him to recover.

Parker was having the weirdest dream about three men trying to force some sort of dark cloud into a teenager. It really freaked him out. His dreams had been coming true lately. It was unlikely that dream would happen, because it looked as if it took place thousands of years ago.

He tried to open his eyes. He was just to weak to do anything. Blood loss was taking its affect, and he could barely breathe. He heard a small crash and a grunt in the room, but didn't think anything of it. The movements became louder and more frequent. Parker forced his eyes open and gasped at the scene in front of him.

Faith was kicking the crap out of Angelus, while Spike, Xander, Willow and fought the other vampired. Drusilla was also in the room, but she was fighting one of her dolls. He would have laughed at the sight of her fighting a doll and the fact that the doll was winning, but he was still to weak.

Soon the vampires were all dust and Angelus had retreated out the window. The group ran over to Parker and untied him from the chair. By then, Parker had blacked out again. Willow had become a powerful witch. Now she didn't even have to worry about going evil. She grabbed onto Parker and turned to the rest of the group. "Meet me at the hospital." In a small blast of energy, Willow and Parker disappeared. The group didn't need to be told, they just hurried out of the room and to the car. They needed to get to the hospital.

rene
11-15-2003, 08:59 PM
that was soooo good! OMG!!! i cant wait for more!!!

Hero
11-15-2003, 09:02 PM
Thanks, lol, I'll post a new chapter tomorrow.

rene
11-15-2003, 09:04 PM
thank you!!!!!! thank you!!! lol

Hero
11-15-2003, 09:06 PM
Oh, and your banners look fine. LoL. I just started making banners too, and mine come out like crap and I can't even get them uploaded right lol.

Orne
11-15-2003, 09:10 PM
great, its great! U have to post more soon!

Magui
11-16-2003, 10:40 AM
oh,i just LOVE it!!!...it's soooo good ;) .post more soon!

Hero
11-18-2003, 08:41 PM
Chapter Seven

"Stake out take out, anyone?" Xander walked into the hospital room and put some food and drinks down on a table in the right hand of the room. "Haha, stake out... stake... haha." He laughed to himself and then started passing the food around.

Willow had arrived at the hospital with Parker in the nick-of-time. The doctors had taken him into the ER and did everything possible to get him into a stable condition. They diagnosed him with severe blood loss, which of course was what he was suffering from. The doctors told Willow that he might slip in and out of consciousness, and that he will be extremely weak until his body makes more blood. They changed him into the ugly hospital clothes, assigned him a room, and at the moment he was sleeping with an IV sticking out of his arm. Spike, Faith, and Xander arrived a few minutes ago. Xander went to his usual job - getting the food.

"Maybe now is not the time to joke, Xander." Faith said. "This is serious, Angelus took a bite outta the kid."

"Buffy made us promise to protect him before she died." Willow was holding Parker's hand, looking down at him sadly. "Parker is all we have left of Buffy, guys. I mean, Dawn was made from her, but she became a prostitute and we haven't seen her in years."

Xander smiled, but Faith and Spike both nudged him.

"We can't let Buffy down." Willow started again. "Her dying wish was for Parker to be safe. If he dies... then we failed. And I won't let that happen. I let her down enough."

"Ah. No. Willow. All the magic in the world couldn't heal what happened to her. It wasn't your fault. You gotta let go." Faith tried to comfort her, but that wasn't really her thing.

"We're all going to get upset." Spike stated. "And frankly I don't feel like being around the washy women." Xander "hey'd". "And Xander. So, let's all try to keep our emotions --"

"Flowers for the injured boy...?"

The group turned to the doorway of the hospital room, where Angelus stood. He grinned evily and held some dead and decomposing flowers in his hand.

"When Buffy had her fever a long time back, I showed up. Just wanted to show the little brat the same type of emotions I shot towards Buffy." Angelus tossed the flowers at Xander. "You were there, weren't you Xander? You were all big and manly. That was really the only time in your life that you've ever been a man. And that was just for your beloved Buffy. So, without her around. Do you think you can stand up to me?"

Faith jumped off her chair and punched Angelus in the face. She kicked him in the keys, but then he grabbed her leg and pushed her back against the wall.

"Sepero." Willow threw a purple ball at Faith and Angelus. A magical field seperated them, Faith on the left side and Angelus on the right. "We are not going to fight in a hospital, especially now." Willow's eyes were turning pure black... with hate... towards Angelus.

Suddenly, the lights and everything electrical went out in the hospital. Everyone looked around confused. Angelus shrugged, giving them an "it wasn't me" look. Then if that wasn't suprising enough, Angelus collapsed to the floor. A couple of men walked into the room once his body was down. THey all wore suits and were definatly British.

"By order of the Watcers council, we here-by demand the custody of Parker Summers over to us immediatly. If you don't give him up willingly, we'll take it by force."


Should I do more?

Orne
11-18-2003, 08:47 PM
Yes, yes u should, its great, u have to keep going!!!

slayerangel
11-18-2003, 09:50 PM
Wow... I'm not trying to suck up or anything, but this is one of the best pieces of fanfic I've ever read! I'm dying for more, though not literally.

rene
11-18-2003, 10:10 PM
that was soooo good! OMG dawn is a prostitute? lol i like that-unless it was a joke i dont know but thats sad!

Hero
11-19-2003, 06:36 AM
Well, I never liked Dawn... So, this was me getting back at her for all the "No one loves me" things. Teehee. I'll post a chapter later today, although I'm not sure how to explain what's gunna happen. So, I'll see how it goes.

Hero
11-19-2003, 09:16 PM
OOC: I got a new banner. You guys like it?

Chapter Eight

"Why do you THINK you're going to take Parker." Faith stood in front of Parker's bed, her hands raised in a fighting position.

"It's none of your concern." One of the Watchers took out a gun and pointed it at everyone. He turned the gun towards Spike. "You're just a ghost, but I advice you that this bullet is blessed with holy water that can send your spirit back to the afterlife."

"Are you ignoring Angelus? He's lying right in front of you. Why don't you get rid of him?" Xander pointed at Angelus. "Do something right for a change instead of doing something stupid."

"It's true. The all mighty, all evil Angelus is before us, but this investigation needs to be handled now." The Watcher moved towards Parker, but Willow stepped in front of his way. "This does not concern you, witch."

"He's just a teenager. He's not going anywhere with you. I'm his legal guardian now that Buffy is dead." She looked at Angelus also. "Why don't you get rid of Angelus? I know that he's responsible for 20 slayer deaths in the past year."

"I told you. This investigation needs to be handled now. The problem could become more serious, and we need to take care of it now." He looked at the group. "I will shoot. If you know how the Watchers Council acts, you know I will shoot you."

"Wait..." Spike piped up. "What investigation?"

* * * * *
Robin Wood sat in the office at his new High School. He had stayed after hours to do some paper work, and he had lost track of time. He packed his things and put them in a folder. He filed the folder and turned off the lights off his office, exiting the room.

He walked down the hallway slowly, unaware of the danger that would be upon him. As he turned the corner of a long hall way, three Bringers jumped out from behind a door.

* * * * *
"You have five seconds." Another Watcher warned. "If you don't give him up, we will shoot." He took out a small gun of his own and pointed it at Xander.

"Let them go..." Spike spoke softly to the group. "We don't want anymore injuries than we already have. Faith and I know where the Watchers Council is. We can go after him later."

"You're making the right choice." The Watchers approached Parker's bed. They unhooked the machines from him and pulled him out of bed. Swinging him over their shoulders, the Watchers exited the room, then the hospital.

"Can this night get any worse? First Parker almost gets killed, now he gets kidnapped." Xander sighed.

Angelus jumped to his feet, late as always. "Where are they? Where are the people that shot me?" He looked around and then saw Faith. "Ah, not in the mood for fighting right now. I'll be back later, Faith-ey." He waved evily, moaning towards Faith, and then disappeared from the hospital.

"What do we do now?" Faith asked.

"Get a bag together. We're headed to England."

rene
11-19-2003, 09:57 PM
that was good and yes your banner is great! did you make it?

Hero
11-19-2003, 09:58 PM
No. Not remotely. I just supplied pictures and the text. My banners come out like mentally retarteded posters...

Magui
11-20-2003, 12:23 PM
that was so good!,what's next?

ana8
11-20-2003, 12:35 PM
Your story is great!!!I can't wait for next chapter...

Shell
11-20-2003, 12:49 PM
I want more!Plllleeeeaaassse!lol

Guestage_87
11-20-2003, 01:02 PM
Good stuff, keep it coming. Excellent!

Hero
11-20-2003, 02:12 PM
hey, thanks for the kind comments. I'll post more tonight.

Hero
11-20-2003, 09:08 PM
Hey guys, I'm not in the mood to type anything tonight. It's been a rough week. I'm beat. I'm probably gunna go to bed now. Sorry. I promise I'll have something for you to read tomorrow. I can leave you with a spoiler though :-)

Spoiler: A 'love' relationship is coming up. And, the true battle against the greatest evil is on it's way. And, a mysterious visit from the future will come to help fight. If you've read the comics, you'd recognise the name - Fray.

Shell
11-21-2003, 12:42 PM
ooooohhhh sounds good!

Magui
11-21-2003, 01:05 PM
noooo!,i havan't read the comics,who is fray?!

Hero
11-21-2003, 02:33 PM
Fray is THE (as in one) Slayer in the very very very distant future. The comic was created by Joss Whedon. Since there is no wood in the future, Fray fights vampires with... THE SCYTHE. Cool uh? here is a great website to look at.

http://www.bigcitygirl.com/

Guestage_87
11-22-2003, 05:17 AM
Hey Parker, have you posted this on any other fan fic site? IF not , you should. Fan Fiction.net is one I suggest, your fic is a whole lot better than most of the stuff on there. Again, great fic, keep up the good writing.

Hero
11-22-2003, 09:23 AM
LoL. Aw. Thanks, your story is great too. I did post it there, or I posted the first chapter. It got 4 replies, I'm just to lazy to update it there lol. I think I might make this into a series... not sure yet.

Chapter Nine

Parker slowly woke up. He was still extremely weak from the amount of blood he lost. He didn't know what happened to him, or how he ended up in England. The last thing he remembered was his father taking a bite out of him.

He opened his eyes and scanned the room he was in. It was very plain, but it could be have been worse. There was a bed at the end of the room, where he was sitting. There was a chair and a table on the other side. There was a window and a door. Atleast he was getting light.

Parker stood up, but was to weak to stand and fell back down on the bed. His following made a loud noise, which echoed through whatever was outside his door. He sat on the bed, leaning his back against the wall, and hoped no one would come in any time soon.

All hopes flew ou the window when the door slowly opened. A young woman opened the door and slowly waked into the room. She seemed to be Parker's age, with blonde hair, and blue eyes. She was pretty, and if he was inside the Watchers Council, most likely she was smart and educated at demonology.

"Hey? Who are you?" She closed the door behind and sat next to him on the bed.

"I'm Parker Summers." He looked at her fearfully, not sure if she was sent in here to kill him.

"Woah! Wait!" She got up and stood in front of him. "Summers as in Buffy Summers?"

"Yeah. I'm her son." Parker smiled as the girl's jaw dropped. He laughed slightly. "Why? Am I famous?"

"No! But your mother is!" She began walking around the room in excitement. "I've read all about her! My favorite story was the one where she did the most good. I remember my father telling me like it was yesterday......."

"I'm not worried." Buffy looked down into the cavern of Turak-hon vampires. She was worried, but if she let her emotions take control, they would lose it.

"Really?" Rona asked, not believing her. "Cuz I'm flashing back to Xander's whole bathroom speech right about now."

"Buffy..." Amanda was terrified.

"I'm not worried. As long as Willow can do the spell before they..."

The Turak-hon vampires stopped and looked up at the cliff they were on. All at once, in a single motion, every vampire in the Hellmouth ran at them with increasing speed.

"That was the best story I've ever heard!" She said, still pacing around the room. "It was like... my bedtime story! I heard it every night."

"Can we please not talk about my mother?" Parker asked. He was still shakey about the subject. She only died last week.

"Why?" She asked. Then she got even more hyper. "CAN I MEET YOUR MOTHER?!?!"

"NO!" Parker snapped at her. "She's dead!" Once he noticed what he just said, and that it was actually reality. He grew really quiet and leaned against the wall, letting his head drop down.

"Oh... I'm..." The girl didn't know what to say. Her Idol, her child hood hero, and more importantly, Parker's mother was dead. She felt really bad that she brought the subject up, and she thought it would be best to try and comfort Parker. "For Buffy... She would want me too..." She sat next to him on the bed and was about to confort him when the door opened and a few Watchers walked into the room.

"What are you doing in here, Jessica?" Roger, one of the Watchers looked at the girl. He guessed that Jessica was her name, and that this Watcher was her father.

"I was just saying hello. This is Buffy's --"

"I know who this is." Roger walked past Jessica and sat in one of the chairs in front of Parker. "We have to do some tests on you. It's very important. Nothing is going to hurt, I promise. I know you're still a little weak, so I'll help you there."

* * * * *

"Nothing is happening. Can you please bring me home now?" Parker begged, looking into the blue crystal sitting in front of him.

"No, it is. We have everything we needed to know." Jessica and a few other Watchers stood at the back of the room, while Roger examined Parker. Roger looked at Parker seriously. He grabbed a scroll from the table and looked at Parker. It would be the first time this scroll would ever be read to someone.



I'm having a REALLY hard time putting the next paragraph together. It has a lot of explaining to do which will be the basis for the rest of the stories. So, I'll post it when I feel it's perfect.

Magui
11-22-2003, 11:57 AM
oh,thanks for posting!!!.i can't wait!!!!...keep it comming,it's sooo great ;) !

Hero
11-22-2003, 07:23 PM
Sorry for the delay. I've been working on Riely stuff this weekend. If you're wondering what Riely is, it's in the off topic area of the site. OK! I THINK I'VE FINALLY GOT THIS DOWN! HERE WE GO!

Chapter Ten

Roger looked down at Parker, nervously, but sternly. "Into every generation one Slayer is born. One girl in all the world who has the strength and skill to hunt the vampires." He looked back down at the scroll. "That's not truely how the story went. The magic men were given two choices. A male and a female. They chose the Male first. They used the power of a demon to invoke him with the powers of the Slayer. However, he broke free and escaped from the magic men. Then they called in the female and made her the official Slayer." He looked back at the scroll for a second time. "Unknown to the magic men, the male was given some parts of the demon. He was not the Vampire Slayer, he was the Vampire Hunter. There are many differences between the Slayer and the Hunter."

The rest of the Watchers stood at the back of the room, watching. Jessica was in the room too, but she was just as confused as Parker was.

"The Hunter doesn't have the super strength, fast healing ability, the strong never ending stamina, stealth, and other abilities. However, the Hunter does have the prophecy dreams, and the senses of the Slayer. The other difference is that two different demons were used to invoke the Slayer and the Hunter. The Slayer is called when a Slayer dies, but a Hunter is BORN! The only way for a Hunter to be born is for a Slayer to have a child." Roger put the scroll down on the table and looked at Parker.

Everyone in the room was silent.

"Parker Summers." He looked at him. "In every generation one Hunter is born. A male in all the world who has the abilities to stop vampires. He will be trained by a Watcher. Parker Summers, you are the Hunter, and I am your Watcher."


THE END


Should I make a sequel?

rene
11-22-2003, 07:32 PM
yes! yes yes! it cant be the end!!! it is soooo good!

Mr. Pointy
11-22-2003, 07:33 PM
Yea - go for it. I'm waiting to see "Scoobies in England" (not to mention getting a bit more background stuff on your take on the Buffyverse) 'cos the "End" is not really the end is it? I bet you've got a whole lot more planned for this story, haven't you? You tease, you :)

Hero
11-22-2003, 07:44 PM
Ah. Ok. I'll make a sequel. Oh, one thing I probably didn't explain before. Robin was the hunter before Parker, but when the Bringers killed Robin, Parker was made into the Hunter.

Mr. Pointy
11-23-2003, 03:23 PM
Robin as in Principal Robin Wood?

Forget I said that - I've just re-read the paragraph with him in - just hadn't realised he'd got killed...